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dreams of yesterday
Has the potiential of stalking JK Rowling
Posts : 1015
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 30
Location : writing again, thank god.
| | Subject: The Beginning of a Story... Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:31 pm | |
| Okay, So I started this story today, and it has like the preface or whatever. I need some comments and shiz on it!
--I could feel the icy breath on my skin. The memories he brought back that I wish I could forget. Aster, Lillian, my mother and father. Aster. The name went through my head at a hundred miles and hour. Aster. Aster. It was like a chant. "Aster." The name escaped from my lips. Aster the one and only. My best friend for eternity.--
So if I could get some thoughts and stuff on it. I love you! | |
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Kaylachu
Crazy, french-speaking, obsessive Mod who is also Batgirl
Posts : 1047
Join date : 2008-04-07
Location : Well....Evil plots don't just make themselves you know!
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:08 pm | |
| who is Aster?  | |
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dreams of yesterday
Has the potiential of stalking JK Rowling
Posts : 1015
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 30
Location : writing again, thank god.
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:11 pm | |
| Ahaha, not funny. It's a story think about it. The girls name is Aleigha want to get the background info? Here
Aleigha lives in an unturned world. Her father abuses her, while her mother does nothing to stop him. Finally, Aleigha is tired of her misery life and runs away. Her life changes when she realizes vampires, werewolves, demons and hunters of the night really do exist and aren't fairy tales after all. | |
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Kaylachu
Crazy, french-speaking, obsessive Mod who is also Batgirl
Posts : 1047
Join date : 2008-04-07
Location : Well....Evil plots don't just make themselves you know!
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:19 pm | |
| oookay then bananapuff....but thats not what i would have guessed, i sadly, am not eddie and cannot read minds...*sniff*
but sounds like a good story
hope you dont mind i moved it to the creative corner because really....thats were it belongs and i wanted to practice my mad mod skills....yeah mad mod | |
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dreams of yesterday
Has the potiential of stalking JK Rowling
Posts : 1015
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 30
Location : writing again, thank god.
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:40 pm | |
| Tish, you are lucky I made you mod. See I am a loving friend and told them you would make an excellent mod! So you should love love love me! | |
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AnEndToAllThatBegins
Eater of all. (You are my snack)
Posts : 391
Join date : 2008-04-14
Age : 30
Location : Under the boardwalk, down by the sea...
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:36 am | |
| - Banana*Bear wrote:
- Tish, you are lucky I made you mod. See I am a loving friend and told them you would make an excellent mod! So you should love love love me!
Actually good mods were sought out on the boards before I even read the application thread, b*b. | |
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dreams of yesterday
Has the potiential of stalking JK Rowling
Posts : 1015
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 30
Location : writing again, thank god.
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Mon Apr 21, 2008 10:39 am | |
| Haha I knew that Jag!! And teag. Thanks! | |
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Sparkles.In.The.Sunlight
Feeling Better Thanks to Jasper
Posts : 235
Join date : 2008-04-08
Location : Trying To Find The London Institiute ♥
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Tue Apr 22, 2008 2:32 pm | |
| wooow that was really good!
right some more pleaseeeeeeeeeee??? | |
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dreams of yesterday
Has the potiential of stalking JK Rowling
Posts : 1015
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 30
Location : writing again, thank god.
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Tue Apr 22, 2008 2:33 pm | |
| I'm starting the first chapter... | |
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Sparkles.In.The.Sunlight
Feeling Better Thanks to Jasper
Posts : 235
Join date : 2008-04-08
Location : Trying To Find The London Institiute ♥
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Tue Apr 22, 2008 2:53 pm | |
| yeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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dreams of yesterday
Has the potiential of stalking JK Rowling
Posts : 1015
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 30
Location : writing again, thank god.
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Tue Apr 22, 2008 2:57 pm | |
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Kaylachu
Crazy, french-speaking, obsessive Mod who is also Batgirl
Posts : 1047
Join date : 2008-04-07
Location : Well....Evil plots don't just make themselves you know!
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Tue Apr 22, 2008 5:58 pm | |
| yess right more! and post it soon! | |
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dreams of yesterday
Has the potiential of stalking JK Rowling
Posts : 1015
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 30
Location : writing again, thank god.
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Tue Apr 22, 2008 7:51 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:56 pm | |
| Really soon!
I love the story line, and the preface is really promissing!!!! I can not WAIT!!! Please post more soon!!! |
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dreams of yesterday
Has the potiential of stalking JK Rowling
Posts : 1015
Join date : 2008-04-06
Age : 30
Location : writing again, thank god.
| | Subject: Re: The Beginning of a Story... Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:51 am | |
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