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PostSubject: The Beginning of a Story...   Sun Apr 20, 2008 9:31 pm
Okay, So I started this story today, and it has like the preface or whatever. I need some comments and shiz on it!

--I could feel the icy breath on my skin. The memories he brought back that I wish I could forget. Aster, Lillian, my mother and father. Aster. The name went through my head at a hundred miles and hour. Aster. Aster. It was like a chant. "Aster." The name escaped from my lips. Aster the one and only. My best friend for eternity.--

So if I could get some thoughts and stuff on it. I love you!
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:08 pm
who is Aster? Razz
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:11 pm
Ahaha, not funny. It's a story think about it. The girls name is Aleigha want to get the background info? Here

Aleigha lives in an unturned world. Her father abuses her, while her mother does nothing to stop him. Finally, Aleigha is tired of her misery life and runs away. Her life changes when she realizes vampires, werewolves, demons and hunters of the night really do exist and aren't fairy tales after all.
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:19 pm
oookay then bananapuff....but thats not what i would have guessed, i sadly, am not eddie and cannot read minds...*sniff*

but sounds like a good story


hope you dont mind i moved it to the creative corner because really....thats were it belongs and i wanted to practice my mad mod skills....yeah mad mod
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:40 pm
Tish, you are lucky I made you mod. See I am a loving friend and told them you would make an excellent mod! So you should love love love me!
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:36 pm
Banana*Bear wrote:
Tish, you are lucky I made you mod. See I am a loving friend and told them you would make an excellent mod! So you should love love love me!


Actually good mods were sought out on the boards before I even read the application thread, b*b.
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Mon Apr 21, 2008 3:45 am
*falls over laughing*
Okay, back to the story...
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVEE iiiittttt!!
Seriously, I do! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:39 am
Haha I knew that Jag!! And teag. Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:32 pm
wooow that was really good!
right some more pleaseeeeeeeeeee???
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:33 pm
I'm starting the first chapter...
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:53 pm
yeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:57 pm
Wow. lol
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Tue Apr 22, 2008 4:58 pm
yess right more! and post it soon!
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:51 pm
I will!
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PostSubject: Re: The Beginning of a Story...   Tue Apr 22, 2008 9:56 pm
Really soon!

I love the story line, and the preface is really promissing!!!! I can not WAIT!!! Please post more soon!!!
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